This blog is only the collection of my own stories. But, if you may want to see or to share stories, or to know more about writing stories, then please visit this forum.....
There are a lot more than this blog. This is although currently the forum is in developing stage, so not all the things are completed and I do apologize in that case.
From ~dark_zigma~
edit @ 13 Dec 2009 03:31:20 by ~dark_zigma~
First of all, as I come here, I would like to apologize you all for the story "I Want to Touch the Stars". I have never thought that there would be a failure in uploading pictures. It seems my internet doesn't work somehow when I want to upload, or maybe my files are too big. So, I can't upload them. TTTT If I have any opportunity to be able to upload them, I will certainly put them in this blog.
So, for now, please wait for my next story updating. I do have another short stories that I wrote. What is left for me to do is typing and updating here.
At last, I wish you all good luck ^^!!
From ~dark_zigma~
Hi! This is another story that I have made. It was written when I was in Mathayom 3, or in other words, when I was 15. The story is not in the written form but a cartoon and has only four pages.
Well, when I first finished the story and let others read mine, it is surprised that different people read it, different things they implied from the story. What I intended to demonstrate in the story is totally different from what one of my friends thought. But she said she like it. My mother is different. She said that my story is nonsense and doesn't reflect anything = =. Another of my friends said that what is good in the story is that it reflects some thoughts for us to think, but what she understood from the story was still different from mine. However, there surprisingly is someone who understood the story correstponding with mine. And, he is one of my English teachers.
It is not long, and unlike "My Space Holiday", I think it is a lot better (since I had already grown up ^^). Well, I hope you would enjoy this story and thank you for visiting. And if possible, if you don't mind, I also hope to receive any comments.
P.S. the story is not coming now, but I promised to updated it tomorrow. Thanks very much!!
edit @ 15 Nov 2009 23:10:06 by ~dark_zigma~
Before I went into the Space, I was very excited. My brother, my friends, and I made a spacecraft. Outside it looked like small but inside it was very big. It was high ability. We planned to go to another galaxy. We were very busy. We must prepare many things: clothes, shoes, foods, etc. The important thing was energy. When that day come, we were ready to go into the space. And then: GO!!!!
Our spacecraft was very fast. We went out from the Earth very quickly. We went past Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Naptune, and Pluto, but we did not visit them. We wanted to go to another galaxy. We used black hole to go to another galaxy. Within minutes, around our spacecraft, it was dark and black. We were really startled and scared. Some of us ran into their bedroom. Some of us hugged together. But I was very excited. I took a lot of flash photographs in the ship then I sent them to my parents. For a short time, we were at a new place. It was very peculiar.
“Now, we are in another galaxy. I’m sure”, said my friend, Matthew. I did, too. We were in another galaxy. We saw a very big black planet. We landed our spacecraft on the big black planet.
When I stepped on the surface, it was soft and my foot went under the surface. And my body was going under, too. We were really startled. My brother, Joseph, wanted me to help me and he held out his hand, then he fell into under the surface. My friend, Alice, she jumped into under the surface. Then Matthew jumped, following Alice, then another friend jumped follow Mathew. It was very amazing. Under the surface, there were living things. Their shape looks like mud. They didn’t have any legs. They slide with their bodies. They didn’t have any fingers. They had three green mouths and one yellow eye. Their bodies were purple. “Booooo! Babariba! Babariby!”, one of the monsters said.
Joseph raised something in his hand. It was a translator machinery. “Oooooooooooooo! Ah!”, said the same monster. Suddenly, the words appeared in the screen of the translator.
“It said ‘What’s that?’”, said Joseph. Then he searched the meaning of “Translator” in the monster’s language with his translator.
“Doo! Diddy! Dee!”, said Joseph. Then the monsters arrested Joseph. They closed Joseph’s eyes. We were startled.
“Let him go”, I said. Then the monster arrested me and my friends. We had closed our eyes . For a while, when we opened them, all we saw around was blue. We saw a very big purple monster.
“MiMi Yorrrr! Ah! MiMi Garana! Na! Beeeee!”, said a very big monster.
“It said ‘What’s your name?’ Its name is Garana. And…..it understands our language. Oh! God! ”, said Joseph.
“Why are you catching us? What do you want?”, I asked Garana.
“Yorrrrr! Ehhhe! Mah!”, said Garana.
“It said that we are trespassing”, said Joseph.
“I’m Angie. We’re so sorry. We don’t mean that and we……”
“Worhhhhh!”, said Garama, then the other monsters arrested us.
We resisted them. Alice pinched one monster. Matthew kicked another monster. Joseph bit. I punched two monsters. Another of my friends fought them.
“Run!”, Matthew shouted, then we ran away from the monsters. They chased us. They tried to arrest us. They were very fast. We ran to our spacecraft but…..
“Where’s our spacecraft? Where is it?”, asked Matthew.
“Look!”, said Alice, the she pointed to something. That was our spacecraft. We ran to it.
“It has become unstable”, I said. The monsters followed us.
“We must take cover the monsters”, said Joseph, then we did. For a while, the monsters went back.
“How can we come back to Earth? We don’t have any spacecraft”, Alice cried.
I walked on the surface of the big black planet. Then I saw something has become strange.
“Everybody come here!” I shouted, “What’s that?” I pointed to something. It looked like the whirlwind. It came to us. We stepped back but the whirlwind was faster. We were whirled very fast, then there was something that was beyond belief. We fell on the floor. We saw another place. It was the room. We saw a computer, and…..
“Time’s up. You must go to bed. Game is over”, said my mother. She was in the room, too, ”I set programs before but you didn’t know. Now, you must go to bed.”
“Oh! My God! I think that is the truth. You make us misunderstand. We think that we can make a spacecraft ”, I said to my mother.
That was four years ago. Now I’m twelve or thirteen years old. But I can remember quite well. I love space. Even that was not the truth, but I want to make a spacecraft and fly in the future. I want to work about that. I want to make my imaginary.
Story by ~dark_zigma~
edit @ 16 Nov 2009 00:10:07 by ~dark_zigma~
Before I went to the space, I was very excite. My brother, my friends, and I made a spacecraft. Outside looked like small but inside was very big. It was high ability. We planed to go to another galaxy. We were very busy. We must prepared many things: clothes, shoes, foods, etc. And the important thing was an energy. When that day was coming, we were ready to go into the space. And then we GO!!!!
Our spacecraft was very fast. We went out from the earth very quickly. We past Mars, Jupiter, Saturn, Uranus, Naptune, and Pluto, but we did not visit them. We wanted to go to another galaxy. We used the black hole to go to another galaxy. That minutes, around of our spacecraft, it was dark and black. We really startled and scared. Some of us ran into their bedroom. Some of us hugged together. But I was very excited. I took a lot of photographs then I sent them to my parents. For a short time, we were at a new place. It was very peculiar. “Now, we are in another galaxy. I’m sure”, said my friend, Matthew. I did, too. We were in another galaxy. We saw a very big black planet. We stopped our spacecraft on the big black planet.
When I stepped on the surface was soft then my foot went under the surface. And my body was going under, too. We really startled. My brother, Joseph, he wanted me to help me and he held out one’s hand, then he falled into under the surface. My friend, Alice, she jumped into under the surface. Then Matthew jumped follow Alice, then another friends jumped follow Mathew. It was very amazing. Under the surface, there were living things. Their shape looks like mud. They didn’t have any legs. They slide with their bodys. They didn’t have any fingers. They had three green mouths and one yellow eye. Their bodies were purple. “Booooo! Babariba! Babariby!”, one of the monsters said. Joseph raised something in his hand. It was a translator machinery. “Oooooooooooooo! Ah!”, said the same monster. Suddenly, the words appeared in the screen of the translator. “It said ‘What’s that?’”, said Joseph. Then he searched the meaning of “Translator” in monster’s language with his translator.
“Doo! Diddy! Dee!”, said Joseph. Then the monsters arrested Joseph. They closed Joseph’s eyes. We startled. “Let him go”, I said. Then the monster arrested me and my friends. We were closed our eyes . For a while, we saw around of us was blue. We saw a very big purple monster. “MiMi Yorrrr! Ah! MiMi Garana! Na! Beeeee!”, said a very big monster. “It said ‘What’s your name?’ Its name is Garana. And…..it understand our language. Oh! God! ”, said Joseph. “Why are you catching us? What do you want?”, I asked Garana.
“Yorrrrr! Ehhhe! Mah!”, said Garana. “It said that we trespass them.”, said Joseph.
“I’m Angie. We’re so sorry. We don’t mean that and we……”
“Worhhhhh!”, said Garama, then the other monsters arrested us. We rebelled them. Alice pinched one monster. Matthew kicked an another monster. Joseph bit. I punched two monsters. My another friends fought them. “Run!”, Matthew shouted, then we ran away from the monsters. They chased us. They tried to arrest us. They were very fast. We ran to our spacecraft but…..
“Where’s our spacecraft? Where is it?”, asked Matthew.
“Look!”, said Alice, the she pointed to something. That was our spacecraft. We ran to it. “It became unstable”, I said.
The monsters followed us. “We must take cover the monsters”, said Joseph, then we did. For a while, the monsters went back.
“How can we come back to Earth? We don’t have any spacecraft”, Alice cried. I walked on the surface of the big black planet. Then I saw something has become strange. “Everybody come here!” I shouted, “What’s that?” I pointed to something. It looked like the whirlwind. It came to us. We stepped back but the whirlwind was faster. We were whirled very fast, then there was something that was beyond belief. We falled on the floor. We saw another place. It was the room. We saw a computer and…..
“Time’s up. You must go to bed. Game is over”, said my mother. She was in the room, too, ”I set programs before but you didn’t know. Now, you must go to bed.”
“Oh! My God! I think that is truth. You make us misunderstand. We think that we can make a spacecraft”, I said to my mother.
That was four years ago. Now I’m twelve or thirteen years old. But I can remember quite well. I love space. Even that was not truth, but I want to make a spacecraft and fly in the future. I want to work about that. I want to make my imaginary.
Story by ~dark_zigma~
edit @ 16 Nov 2009 00:09:27 by ~dark_zigma~
